Rough Cut Number 2

BELOW IS THE COMMENTS WE RECEIVED FROM THE AUDIENCE AFTER THE ROUGH CUT NUMBER 2
'When watching the video I thought that the main character wasn't wearing the correct clothes for his job role. Secondly, I noticed that the lighting for the band performance was very dull and there wasn't enough room for the whole band to fit on camera'. Luke Thompson

'There was a lot of aspects in the video that I wasn't sure about. Firstly, the bags were in shot during the beach scene, also the lighting was very poor in the bedroom where the band were performing'. Rachael Bell

'Personally, I thought that the wheel chair being on the beach didn't work very well because the character kept getting stuck in the sand. Furthermore, this wasn't realistic as a person in a wheel chair would probably avoid the sand'. Katie Green

'There was one major problem with video that I spotted, and this was the water mark on the camera which showed lack of professionalism. What's more is that the shot were way too long, some more that 10 seconds!'. Dan Shipley

'I thought that this genre of music included more shots of the band performing. When watching this video there wasn't much of a band performance'. Sam Busby

'In some scenes the camera was shaky. Especially during the beach scenes. At the end I was confused at what was happening. The actor disappears with no indication of where he goes'. Scott Shannon

Final DVD Cover Inside

This is the inside of the DVD cover. The audience can view this when they open the DVD box.

Final DVD Cover

This is our Final DVD Front Cover. Our advances on the Rough Cut are the inclusion of the picture format, languages and DVD type. Furthermore, copyright details were included as well as a band website.

Final Advert

This is our Final Advert. Moving on from the Rough Cut we decided to include a website so it was easier for the audience to get tickets. We moved the title to a more central position so it would conform to the conventions of a DVD cover.